9/5/08
I `ve had the most impressive experience of my live so far just a few hours ago.Pete is dead and the pilot has both legs broken.Luckily Pamela,Borja and me are o.k,even though Borja has a terrible headache.I got a cut on my left arm but it doesn`t look serious.The people that were in the front seats of the small plane turned out much more damaged.Suan, the pilot is having a hell .We tried to fix her legs at the straightest position we could.The seat belts did a great job.We looked at the map and decided to do something.The heat was hard at the crash site,we had to make a shelter out of the wrecked plane so that pamela would take care of Susan while Borja set off to take a look at a fire we saw in the distance.There might be someone.Maybe a house.He hasn`t come back yet.We walked together toward the forest and there we chose a place to prepare a new shelter in case it will take long to get rescued or whatever.I cut a couple of wooden rods to make a stretcher to carry Susan to the woods.I hope Borja will be back soon with some news about that fire we saw.
martes, 13 de mayo de 2008
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Very accurate writing and some great use of vocabulary here Juan.
Just a few points to look at:
fared much worse rather than "turned out much more damaged".
the pilot is having a hell of a time instead of "the pilot is having a hell".
The heat was fierce rather than "The heat was hard"
and
in case it takes a long time... instead of "in case it will take long...".
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